Creating a new world anyone?

this is a parody i made using the well-known Death Note's comic strip
before u read, u should know the definition of:
Death Note: a comic from Japan which goes around a Note which can kill people by knowing how they look like and writing the victim's name in the Note.
Lollies: plural for Lolly or Lolita, which means underage girls
Lolicon: people who likes lolita, in other words, they are "straight pedophillia"
Bishies: Plural for Bishounen, which means beautiful guys in manga.
Yaoi: manga style of beautiful gay porn.

i find it amusing myself, this version has been update and free from some typo i made last time, Raito goes: "oops!" instead of "shit"
pls comment on my blog if u find it entertaining